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Jack and The Fountain of Youth — Audio Installment 99

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JACK AND THE FOUNTAIN OF YOUTH
by HL Carpenter
ISBN: 978-0-9884095-1-4
Ebook ISBN: 978-0-9884095-0-7
Copyright (c) 2012 by Top Drawer Ink Corp.

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Jack and The Fountain of Youth — Audio Installment 99

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Below is the text version of the audio.
(Show notes are beneath the text.)

 

She took a step closer. She wanted to touch him, to comfort him.

He drew back.

She’d known he would. He thought he was right. He always wanted to do what was right, no matter the cost to himself.

“Then we need to go back to the Fountain now,” she said.

He shook his head. “What is the point? We cannot collect enough water for both Tia Bella and me to bathe. Even if we could, who knows what will happen?”

“You’re forgetting Bradley.”

Her brother could help. She’d beg for his help if she had to. The possibility of Jack dying the moment the water touched him was too awful to contemplate.

She marched over to Jack and poked her finger against his shoulder.

“You can stay here with Harey if you want. I’m going.”

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SHOW NOTES

We’re new to the Audacity, the sound program we use for our audio recordings, and to sound effects in general. These are our thoughts on the current episode.

Recording. We recorded this segment in two takes, after three practice runs with the microphone off.

Technical. No technical glitches this week.

Comments. Shoulder rolls, voice exercises, and sips from a bottle of water helped control mouth noises and clicks this week.

Story changes. Added paragraph breaks and a new section to the written version this week. Working on this after coming off edits of another project gives us a renewed eye for errors and other changes.

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***** ABOUT THE AUTHOR *****

HL Carpenter is a mother/daughter duo who write family-friendly fiction from their studios in Carpenter Country, a magical place that, like their stories, is unreal but not untrue. When they’re not writing, the Carpenters enjoy exploring the Land of What-If and practicing the fine art of Curiosity. Visit Carpenter Country at hlcarpenter.com.

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Fiction by HL Carpenter:

Jack and The Fountain of Youth. Some people say the Fountain of Youth is a myth. Jack Ponsi Dileonardo Thomas knows better.

The SkyHorse. Fourteen year old Tovi thinks finding a flying horse is fabulous luck–until a mysterious stranger says finders aren’t always keepers.

The Demise of Fyne Literature. Who killed Fyne Literature? The Fictional Book Investigation Agency is on the case—and the lead investigator is closer to the culprit than he realizes.

Dream Stealer. Is stealing a dream better than losing your own?

Walled In. When her father is accused of fraud, seventeen year old Vandy Spencer discovers her entire life has been built on a heart-shattering deception.

Pirate Summer. When her brother disappears, Josey is sure she knows where he’s gone. And the only way to bring him home is to travel two hundred years into the past with a boy she can’t trust.

A Cause for Murder. Someone at Happy Haven is a killer. Septuagenarian sleuth Emma Twiggs navigates madcap mayhem, multiple mysteries, and murderous motives to discover who has a cause for murder.

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