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Jack and The Fountain of Youth — Audio Installment 98

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JACK AND THE FOUNTAIN OF YOUTH
by HL Carpenter
ISBN: 978-0-9884095-1-4
Ebook ISBN: 978-0-9884095-0-7
Copyright (c) 2012 by Top Drawer Ink Corp.

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Continued from Audio Installment 97
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Jack and The Fountain of Youth — Audio Installment 98

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Below is the text version of the audio.
(Show notes are beneath the text.)

 

“Of course I meant what I said. That is exactly why I should not have told you.” Jack spun away from her.

She rubbed her hands along her arms, much the way he had earlier. “I don’t understand.”

He turned back, his face tight. “I am still not free of this curse. Maybe I never will be. The sample is gone, and the chances are very good Hurricane Lulu will make the Fountain disappear before Tia Bella can get here.”

His argument made sense. Still…

She said, “We have the GPS coordinates. We can find the Fountain again.”

“Can we?” Jack rubbed his hand across his face. “Having the coordinates means we know where the Fountain was. We do not know where it might surface again.” He paused. “Or when.”

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SHOW NOTES

We’re new to the Audacity, the sound program we use for our audio recordings, and to sound effects in general. These are our thoughts on the current episode.

Recording. We recorded this segment in two takes, after three practice runs with the microphone off.

Technical. The new positioning of the audio booth may not work out. We’re hearing a lot of background noise in the original. Fortunately, the noise removal effect in Audacity takes most of the noise out.

Comments. So very easy to fall into breathing patterns that do not work well with audio. Warming up the voice and being conscious of inhalations makes for better audio.

Story changes. Quite a few changes to the written version this week. The dialogue appeared stranded on the page with no corresponding action or reaction by the characters. We added several lines to show what they were feeling.

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***** ABOUT THE AUTHOR *****

HL Carpenter is a mother/daughter duo who write family-friendly fiction from their studios in Carpenter Country, a magical place that, like their stories, is unreal but not untrue. When they’re not writing, the Carpenters enjoy exploring the Land of What-If and practicing the fine art of Curiosity. Visit Carpenter Country at hlcarpenter.com.

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Fiction by HL Carpenter:

Jack and The Fountain of Youth. Some people say the Fountain of Youth is a myth. Jack Ponsi Dileonardo Thomas knows better.

The SkyHorse. Fourteen year old Tovi thinks finding a flying horse is fabulous luck–until a mysterious stranger says finders aren’t always keepers.

The Demise of Fyne Literature. Who killed Fyne Literature? The Fictional Book Investigation Agency is on the case—and the lead investigator is closer to the culprit than he realizes.

Dream Stealer. Is stealing a dream better than losing your own?

Walled In. When her father is accused of fraud, seventeen year old Vandy Spencer discovers her entire life has been built on a heart-shattering deception.

Pirate Summer. When her brother disappears, Josey is sure she knows where he’s gone. And the only way to bring him home is to travel two hundred years into the past with a boy she can’t trust.

A Cause for Murder. Someone at Happy Haven is a killer. Septuagenarian sleuth Emma Twiggs navigates madcap mayhem, multiple mysteries, and murderous motives to discover who has a cause for murder.

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