Jack and The Fountain of Youth — Audio Installment 75

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JACK AND THE FOUNTAIN OF YOUTH
by HL Carpenter
ISBN: 978-0-9884095-1-4
Ebook ISBN: 978-0-9884095-0-7
Copyright (c) 2012 by Top Drawer Ink Corp.

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Jack and The Fountain of Youth — Audio Installment 75

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Below is the text version of the audio.
(Show notes are beneath the text.)

 

He said, “I would like to stay.”

“I hoped you’d say that.” The red splotches faded from her face.

“You had only to ask.”

He wished he could always be by her side when she needed him. But reality was that finding the Fountain hadn’t changed the facts. What he wanted with Nessa and what he could have were centuries apart.

“What do we need to do?” he asked.

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SHOW NOTES

We’re new to the Audacity, the sound program we use for our audio recordings, and to sound effects in general. These are our thoughts on the current episode.

Recording. We recorded this segment in one take, after three practice runs with the microphone off.

Technical. A lot of unidentifiable background noise this week. We used the noise reduction effect in Audacity and copied and pasted the quieter sections over the humming.

Comments. A bad case of morning voice today makes the audio sound less professional to our ears.

Story changes. Changed the written version this week to eliminate “it” from multiple places in the fourth paragraph. The revised version has more heart and is less timid.

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***** ABOUT THE AUTHOR *****

HL Carpenter is a Florida-based mother/daughter duo who writes family-friendly fiction from their studios in Carpenter Country, a magical place that, like their stories, is unreal but not untrue. When they’re not writing, the Carpenters enjoy exploring the Land of What-If and practicing the fine art of Curiosity. Visit Carpenter Country at hlcarpenter.com.

Fiction by HL Carpenter:

Jack and The Fountain of Youth. Some people say the Fountain of Youth is a myth. Jack Ponsi Dileonardo Thomas knows better.

The SkyHorse. Fourteen year old Tovi thinks finding a flying horse is fabulous luck–until a mysterious stranger says finders aren’t always keepers.

Dream Stealer. Is stealing a dream better than losing your own?

Walled In. When her father is accused of fraud, seventeen year old Vandy Spencer discovers her entire life has been built on a heart-shattering deception.

Pirate Summer. When her brother disappears, Josey is sure she knows where he’s gone. And the only way to bring him home is to travel two hundred years into the past with a boy she can’t trust.

A Cause for Murder. Someone at Happy Haven is a killer. Septuagenarian sleuth Emma Twiggs navigates madcap mayhem, multiple mysteries, and murderous motives to discover who has a cause for murder.

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