Fiction, Jack

Jack and The Fountain of Youth — Audio Installment 58

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by HL Carpenter
ISBN: 978-0-9884095-1-4
Ebook ISBN: 978-0-9884095-0-7
Copyright (c) 2012 by Top Drawer Ink Corp.


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Jack and The Fountain of Youth — Audio Installment 58


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“No,” Jack said. “My knowledge is first-hand. I was here, with the expedition, along with Maria and Tia Bella.”

“Who are they?” Tenspot asked.

“My twin sister and my aunt.” Jack gestured at the hole in the ground. “I found the fuente by accident. It was much more open than this in 1513. It looked like a small deep pool. The water was cool and clear and the day was hot, like today, a break in the middle of two big storms. All three of us drank from the Fountain. But Maria aged in the years afterward, when we returned to España. Tia Bella and I stayed young.”

When he’d spoken of his sister’s death, his sorrow had been genuine.

“How come Maria didn’t live forever?” Nessa asked.



We’re new to the Audacity, the sound program we use for our audio recordings, and to sound effects in general. These are our thoughts on the current episode.

Recording. We recorded this segment in two takes, after three practice runs with the microphone off.

Technical. This week, we recorded in a small booth surrounded with acoustic foam and sound blankets.

Comments. The recording went more easily this week, though this version still sounds as if we are reading aloud instead of inhabiting the character.

Story changes. No changes to the written version this week. We noted two “it”s though we did not change them.


***** ABOUT THE AUTHOR *****

HL Carpenter is the pen name of a Florida-based mother/daughter duo who writes from their studios in Carpenter Country, a magical place that, like their stories, is unreal but not untrue. When they’re not writing, the Carpenters enjoy exploring the Land of What-If and practicing the fine art of Curiosity.

Also by HL Carpenter:

The SkyHorse. Fourteen year old Tovi thinks finding a flying horse is fabulous luck–until a mysterious stranger says finders aren’t always keepers.

Dream Stealer. Is stealing a dream better than losing your own?

Pirate Summer. When her brother disappears, Josey is sure she knows where he’s gone. And the only way to bring him home is to travel two hundred years into the past with a boy she can’t trust.

A Cause for Murder. Someone at Happy Haven is a killer. Septuagenarian sleuth Emma Twiggs navigates madcap mayhem, multiple mysteries, and murderous motives to discover who has a cause for murder.


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